What made it work is the specificity: an exact itinerary, both sides of the financial proof named in one paragraph, and my parents' ties to home spelled out rather than implied.
Ali Rahman
Musterstraße 12
10115 Berlin, Germany
Phone: +49 176 000 000 00
Email: ali.rahman@example.com
Date: 10.03.2026
To
The Visa Officer
Embassy of the Federal Republic of Germany
Islamabad, Pakistan
Dear Sir or Madam,
I, Ali Rahman, born on 12 April 1996 in Lahore, am a German-Pakistani dual national and currently reside at Musterstraße 12, 10115 Berlin, Germany. I hold a German passport, passport number X1234567, issued by the City of Berlin.
I am employed as a Product Manager at a technology company in Berlin, where I have been working since 2023.
I am writing this letter to invite my father, mother, and sister to visit me in Germany for a short family visit and tourism trip from 5 September 2026 to 21 September 2026.
The invited persons are:
- Father: Imran Rahman, born on 12 February 1965 in Lahore, Pakistan, passport number Y7654321
- Mother: Sara Rahman, born on 8 June 1970
- Sister: Hina Rahman, born on 3 November 2011
They currently reside at: House 14, Street 6, Model Town, Lahore, Pakistan.
The purpose of their visit is to spend time with me and my wife in Berlin, as well as to visit Germany and other nearby European destinations for tourism. During their stay, they will mainly stay with me at my apartment in Berlin. We also plan to travel together, including a visit to Lake Garda, Italy, and possibly Salzburg, Austria.
I will provide accommodation for them during their stay in Germany and will cover their food, local transport, and daily expenses during the trip. Their flight costs will be covered by my parents. They also have their own sufficient financial means, strong bank statements, travel insurance, and return flight bookings. I have also obtained a Verpflichtungserklärung for their visit.
My father is a respected businessman in Pakistan with over 40 years of professional experience. My parents have strong family, financial, business, and property ties to Pakistan. My father has also travelled to Europe multiple times before and has had no visa refusals. My mother is a homemaker and wishes to visit me and explore Germany and Europe with the family. My sister is currently a high school student in Pakistan and will return after the visit, as her school continues shortly after the planned travel period.
This visit is intended only as a temporary family visit and tourism trip. My family will return to Pakistan before the expiry of their Schengen visa and in accordance with all visa rules and regulations.
I kindly request you to consider their visa applications positively. Please feel free to contact me if any further information is required.
Yours faithfully,
Ali Rahman
We also attached a short cover note explaining a delay in the physical Verpflichtungserklärung, since it had to be couriered from Germany to Pakistan and arrived after our visa appointment slot was already confirmed:
Explanation Regarding Original Verpflichtungserklärung
Dear Sir or Madam,
Please note that the original Verpflichtungserklärung issued in Berlin for the visit of Imran Rahman, Sara Rahman, and Hina Rahman is currently being sent from Germany to Pakistan by express courier.
Due to the short time before the visa appointment, the applicants are submitting a clear copy of the Verpflichtungserklärung together with the courier tracking proof. The original document will be provided immediately upon arrival if required.
Thank you for your understanding.
Yours faithfully,
Ali Rahman
If your own Verpflichtungserklärung will not arrive before your appointment, a note like this one, with courier tracking attached, is worth including rather than leaving the gap unexplained.